This lesson was an introduction to Australia's contribution to international popular culture (movies, t.v. sport, music etc). The students were told to make a table and record how Australia is represented in each clip and how Australia/Australians are portrayed to international audiences. The class then discussed how this portrayal has changed over time.
- answer the question and provide a strong contention
- demonstrate a close understanding of relevant content (spell names of people and countries correctly, make sure that you fully understand the sequence of events)
- are clear, use appropriate language and terminology, and have effective structure
What are the signs of a good essay?
- It has a clear and firmly expressed argument in the introduction and conclusion
- It expands upon, justifies and defends that argument throughout the essay body
- It has good structure, ie. logical and effective organisation of ideas and topics, that suggests thinking and planning
- It supports its arguments and statements with evidence
- It uses clear language that conveys meaning
- It analyses by considering the significance of certain events/policies/decisions, rather than just describing them
The difference between description and analysis
Analysis rather than description is generally what distinguishes between a poor or average essay and a good or great essay. It is the difference between explaining what happened and the higher-order skill of explaining why it happened and evaluating its significance.
So, consider the following points when striving for analysis and evaluation over description:
- When describing or explaining an event or policy use one sentence
- Then, consider what motivated (i.e. what was the aim) this event or policy
- Then, consider what effects or outcomes did this event or policy stimulate
- Now, what links did it have to other events or policies? Look for connections
- Finally, can we explain its significance or ‘meaning’? How important was it, by comparison to other factors?
Writing a paragraph
Essay paragraphs introduce a point, expand and explain the point, discuss its significance, support ideas with evidence, then link back to the question and their main argument.
Topic sentence
A short, punchy sentence that introduces the topic, theme, idea, event or leader of that paragraph
Explanation
A sentence or two explaining what it was, who they were, what it involved or what happened, ie. a summary
Evidence
Support your explanation with appropriate evidence (e.g. specific policies, decisions, events)
Link
Finally, link back to the question and the argument you have clearly articulated in your introduction